Howdy!
Canadian Art magazine (bless their heart) tries again, and misses by miles.
In no particular order:
+ If you're going to do a slide show during a conversation about objects, you might want to consider having the objects discussed be on screen at the same time as they are being discussed.
+ If the subject has taken care to make sure that the objects are level, you might want to try and get your images level as well.
+ Color correction (for part three) is your friend.
+ 10 minutes, 2 minutes, 2 minutes? How about 5 minutes, 5 minutes, 4 minutes?
+ It's always a good idea not to cut your subject off in mid-sentence.
